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firewall

To commit the perfect crime, you need the perfect criminal


Firewall is a science fiction action adventure thriller film script, set in a future a few hundred years from now. It details the events that lead up to the worst disaster in our races' space faring history, all caused by one man's greed.

Firewall was a reworking of some of the events in theFomalhautPlague, however it lacks the emotional resonance of the novel, instead pushing action adventure to the narrative foreground.

A small excerpt can be found below




Firewall by darrenwhite
© Darren White 1997

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Excerpt from the motion picture screenplay Firewall:
© 1997 Darren White. All rights reserved.


INT. CORRIDOR, STALLITANO SPACE STATION, DIM
FALSE EYE smiles a mischievous smile. JED, CRIMINAL #2, CRIMINAL #4 and CRIMINAL #5 are standing by a door in a stark, drab corridor. He motions to JED and CRIMINAL #5.

                                                                       FALSE EYE
                                       Gentlemen. Care to join me? You two - no one comes in.

FALSE EYE smiles as he opens the hatch. They step through into -


EXT. COUNTRY MEADOW, SUMMER, BRIGHT
- an explosion of green assaulting the eye. Butterflies flutter soothingly over a flower splattered, grassy meadow. Bird song fills the air. A warm sun pours from a strikingly blue sky, between pillows of fluffy white clouds.

The sun drips over the field and warms the face of a stranger as he squints into the sun, the expression in his eyes neutral. Over his shoulder is a beautiful tranquil scene. The sunlight explodes around him to -


INT. GYMNASIUM, STALLITANO STATION, BRIGHT
- REVEAL his arms stretched out diagonally. He is bound in a circular gyroscopic exercise machine. FALSE EYE, JED and CRIMINAL #5 walk in a tight triangle over the metal floor towards him. A huge, ultra high definition, three dimensional dome screen covers them, breaking the illusion. The stranger is pulled into a star shape. He is naked to the waist with a tape gag over his mouth.

                                                                                JED
                                                                     Enjoying the view?

FALSE EYE smiles as he walks towards the bound prisoner. He holds a leather sheaf up to eye level and slowly pulls a long knife from it.

                                                                         FALSE EYE
                     Hello Jack. So nice of you to see me like this. At such short notice 

                     and all. Must be a real bind for you.

The bound man struggles against his restraints.

                                                                         FALSE EYE
                    I guess you already know why you're here, otherwise you wouldn’t be in 

                   such a spin.

FALSE EYE spins the gyroscopic machine vertically and begins to slowly circle it.

                                                                         FALSE EYE
                   You got greedy Jack. Very greedy. You could have just taken your bribes 

                   like a good little boy and been happy.

FALSE EYE suddenly reaches out and catches the machine, stopping it with one hand. He begins to run the blade of his knife over JACK's naked skin.

                                                                        FALSE EYE
                     But no, you decided that you could make more money by playing me off

                     against the authorities. You sold them information about us with one hand 
                     while you took my money with the other. You treated me like a fool, Jack, 
                     and I just can't allow that.

The image on the dome screen around them switches to a desert scene. They are suddenly surrounded by miles of wind swept golden sand under a burning sky. The sound of an ersatz wind whistles around them. FALSE EYE stops before his bound prisoner.

                                                                       FALSE EYE
                     Normally, I throw people out of an airlock for what you've done. Have you 

                     ever seen what happens to people who accidentally fall out of airlocks? 
                     It’s not recommended.

JACK squirms. FALSE EYE holds the knife blade up to his cheek bone.

                                                                       FALSE EYE
                                          The air in their bodies erupts out through their skin.

FALSE EYE whips the blade tip down the line of his prisoner's cheek bone, opening the skin. JACK writhes in pain as the line of blood spreads from the cut.

JED winces in the background, viewing the scene with disdain.

JACK moans through the gag. FALSE EYE cuts the other cheek as he walks around him. The image changes behind them. It’s suddenly a huge waterfall over black rock. The raging waters churn up mounds of foam and the sound of the elemental passion almost drown FALSE EYE’s voice,

                                                                     FALSE EYE
                                                 The skin splits wherever it’s taut over bone.

FALSE EYE slices the skin over his prisoners’ shoulder blades.

                                                                    FALSE EYE
                                         And the longer you're out in space, the more it splits.

FALSE EYE slices the skin over the prisoner's elbow. Then he pauses, considering the moment. He smiles.

                                                                    FALSE EYE
                     Did you hear about Neil and Jeri’s wedding last week? You’re going to love

                     this. They played a game, with Neil and Jeri. A game where you take one of 
                     the couple away, make sure they can’t hear and you ask their partner all sorts 
                     of questions about them.

FALSE EYE runs the blade tip lightly down the prisoner's back. He moans in fear. The image of the waterfall is suddenly replaced with a vista of a tropical island. Lush green foliage sways relaxingly over white sands. A clear sea laps at the beach edge, filling the room with a soothing soundtrack.

                                                                     FALSE EYE
                       The partner you shouldn't double cross.
                       (a beat)
                       Questions like what’s your husbands’ favourite food? How long does he 

                       wear his shorts? How long can he keep it up for? Well, you know how 
                       people are. Then they bring the other one back and ask them the same 
                       questions. Test how much they know about each other. They start by 
                       asking normal, boring questions. Then the final question is ‘where's the
                       most unusual place you've fucked?'

FALSE EYE walks back around to the front of his prisoner. The image on the dome fades and is replaced with the infinite blue of a deep underwater scene. The piercing blue seems to hum from the background. The soft sound of aqualung breathing sighs around them.

                                                                    FALSE EYE
                                                          Are you following all this?
                       (a beat)
                       His answer is in a church yard, against a grave stone. The fucking 

                       degenerate. Then they bring her back. They ask her the easy, geeky 
                       questions - which she gets right - then they come to the question about 
                       where she’s been fucked. 

The image behind them is replaced by an autumnal forest. Foreboding golds, browns and rusts fill the space between them, while melancholic bird song fills the air with nature’s lament.

                                                                   FALSE EYE
                       She says that she can’t answer that. She’s really freaking and laughing

                       and saying that she just can’t answer that question. Everyone says that 
                       she’s got to. It doesn’t matter anyway. He already answered.
                       (a beat)
                       He's already betrayed their secrets.

FALSE EYE holds the knife tip up to his victim's eye, as if he’s about to pierce the eyeball. It glints in the golden light.

                                                                    FALSE EYE
                        Are you beginning to get my point? Are you beginning to see the 

                       relevance of this story to you and me?
                       (a beat)
                       She can’t answer for ages. They crowd are all baying for an answer. 

                       Chanting and clapping to encourage her, until finally she gives in. 
                       She tells them that the most unusual place that they’ve had sex is…
                       (a beat)
                      …wait for it…

A bright snow scene erupts from the screen, burning away the shadows from their faces. The laughter of children drifts almost imperceptibly from hidden speakers. FALSE EYE moves back around to the rear of his prisoner. He begins to pull the prisoner's shorts down. His intentions are hidden. The prisoner squirms in absolute terror, unsure of FALSE EYE’s motives.

                                                                    FALSE EYE
                 …she says that the most unusual place they’ve had sex is right up her arse!

FALSE EYE rams the knife up his prisoner's anus. The prisoner squeals a muffled cry. Far off children’s laughter escapes from the screen again, ringing like distant chimes. FALSE EYE continues to thrust the knife further and further up as the prisoner desperately writhes around. FALSE EYE looks manic. His teeth are clenched.

The snow scene dissolves to a burning sunset. A huge, red sun boils over a dark landscape as it slips beneath a shadowed horizon. The brightness of the snow scene surrenders to the vague, warm glow. The light begins to fade quickly to black.

                                                                     FALSE EYE
                                     Up her arse. How about that? In front of everybody.

FALSE EYE yanks the knife from JACK’s body, wiping it quickly on his skin. He stands behind him, fighting to regain control of his breath and emotions. The fading light around him mirrors the calming of his mood. The sun has almost slipped beneath the horizon, leaving just a burning line marking the boundary between land and sky.

As the light drains FALSE EYE seems to merge into the shadows. When the light finally disappears all that remains is the sound of FALSE EYE’s rasping breathing in the all consuming darkness.

                                                                    FALSE EYE
                                  Leave him to bleed. Leave him here for everyone to see.

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